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DankTheTank · 01-07-2007, 01:48 AM

Dirt Broke and craving for a toke

Call up my boy to puff the smoke

Spark goes the lighter as I take a puff

Inhale hard as the chronic goes down rough

Seeing in threes because of the bomb ass trees

My boy asks me if I want another hit and I say "please."

I Cough a little more as I start to weeze.

Now I lean back my seat and let the reggae in

I light up the bowl then pass it to my friend.

The times are good and now I'm feeling fine but theres nothing I'd like better than one more hit of the kind.

So when I have it I light it up and when I dont I call him up.

Cause buddha is great but friends are better, thats why I call them up when I lack the cheddar.

Just a little something I threw together.

big_goofy · 01-07-2007, 03:21 AM

nice!!!! i like it

is that a reflection of your current situation? cause it's pretty similar to my current status!

Cannabliss · 01-07-2007, 04:15 AM

Flows nicely, I can picture it all in my head. I can empathize with your situation too.

DankTheTank · 01-07-2007, 05:39 AM

haha nope not my current situation, I'm actually stackin bills right now

but I've had times like this and I love to spread the joy of bud.

RoldGold27 · 01-08-2007, 11:42 PM

Nothing better when you lack trees and green then having a friend call you up to smoke you up.

hott_shiit420 · 01-09-2007, 03:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DankTheTank

Dirt Broke and craving for a toke
Call up my boy to puff the smoke
Spark goes the lighter as I take a puff
Inhale hard as the chronic goes down rough
Seeing in threes because of the bomb ass trees
My boy asks me if I want another hit and I say "please."
I Cough a little more as I start to weeze.
Now I lean back my seat and let the reggae in
I light up the bowl then pass it to my friend.
The times are good and now I'm feeling fine but theres nothing I'd like better than one more hit of the kind.
So when I have it I light it up and when I dont I call him up.
Cause buddha is great but friends are better, thats why I call them up when I lack the cheddar.

Just a little something I threw together.

ya know boy, it has rythm, and i was kinda goin with it.
lol
nice work.

SmasheR · 01-09-2007, 03:49 AM

Good stuff, I wish I had flow like that. I'd change the last word to "cheddah" though.

hott_shiit420 · 01-09-2007, 04:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SmasheR

Good stuff, I wish I had flow like that. I'd change the last word to "cheddah" though.

true true.
but it still sounded hot.

DankTheTank · 01-10-2007, 03:12 AM

Thanks everyone for the positive feedback, I'll definatley write more poems like this in the near future and I have to take the constructive critisim last word is now changed to "chedda."

hmmm for some reason it isnt letting me edit my first post?

Tenderlungs · 01-10-2007, 03:50 AM

Fucking nice man. That made me smile.

01-07-2007, 01:48 AM	#1
DankTheTank Jr. Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 131 Grams: 1,419.30 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I Get by with a little help from my friends Dirt Broke and craving for a toke Call up my boy to puff the smoke Spark goes the lighter as I take a puff Inhale hard as the chronic goes down rough Seeing in threes because of the bomb ass trees My boy asks me if I want another hit and I say "please." I Cough a little more as I start to weeze. Now I lean back my seat and let the reggae in I light up the bowl then pass it to my friend. The times are good and now I'm feeling fine but theres nothing I'd like better than one more hit of the kind. So when I have it I light it up and when I dont I call him up. Cause buddha is great but friends are better, thats why I call them up when I lack the cheddar. Just a little something I threw together. __________________ grow fields toke pounds praise the most high

01-07-2007, 03:21 AM	#2
big_goofy Jr. Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 471 Grams: 831.95 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	nice!!!! i like it is that a reflection of your current situation? cause it's pretty similar to my current status! __________________ "Republic. I like the sound of the word. It means people can live free, talk free, go or come, buy or sell, be drunk or sober, however they choose." - John Wayne

01-07-2007, 04:15 AM	#3
Cannabliss Jr. Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 470 Grams: 1,659.91 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Flows nicely, I can picture it all in my head. I can empathize with your situation too. __________________ Marijuanera

01-08-2007, 11:42 PM	#5
RoldGold27 Jr. Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 467 Grams: 1,466.94 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Nothing better when you lack trees and green then having a friend call you up to smoke you up. __________________ Went to see the captain, strangest I could find, Laid my proposition down, laid it on the line. I wont slave for beggars pay, likewise gold and jewels, But I would slave to learn the way to sink your ship of foolsGrateful dead

01-09-2007, 03:49 AM	#7
SmasheR TONIGHT, we RIDE Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,804 Grams: 2,596.60 Groans: 3 Groaned at 1 Time in 1 Post Thanks: 7 Thanked 29 Times in 21 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Good stuff, I wish I had flow like that. I'd change the last word to "cheddah" though. __________________ Left the philly at home, do you have another? I wanna get blunted my brother.. My dvd collection would take a shit on your dvd collection.

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01-07-2007, 05:39 AM	#4
DankTheTank Jr. Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 131 Grams: 1,419.30 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	haha nope not my current situation, I'm actually stackin bills right now but I've had times like this and I love to spread the joy of bud.

01-10-2007, 03:12 AM	#9
DankTheTank Jr. Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 131 Grams: 1,419.30 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Thanks everyone for the positive feedback, I'll definatley write more poems like this in the near future and I have to take the constructive critisim last word is now changed to "chedda." hmmm for some reason it isnt letting me edit my first post?

01-10-2007, 03:50 AM	#10
Tenderlungs Sr. Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 714 Grams: 975.65 Groans: 24 Groaned at 10 Times in 8 Posts Thanks: 518 Thanked 144 Times in 88 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Fucking nice man. That made me smile.

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