tekkenlaw

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I'm through it like a Nasal Twang
it ain't my thang, play it through again,
God damn I want to sang my thang.

Like your nasality neutrality, it's reality.
Thinking, laying, shout it;

Gimme a reason you sneezin', I'm freezin',
Pleasing, teasing, squeezing and wheezing;
So that's how I kick it, I'm nosin', I'm mother fucking proesin'.

Comments, criticisms, concerns? It's my 3rd poem ever but I think it turned out well.

shirschmokealot

I dont understand much of it, and it sounds more like a rap, but I like it!

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dreamsurge

hmm is all I have to say

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The only reason weed is illegal is because the police must make their quota. Most drug-users arrested are, in fact, stoners.
In short, EVERYONE SMOKES THIS GREEN PIECE OF HEAVEN!!!

tekkenlaw

Lol I was high.

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Olórin

i actually like it! haha

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Three Rings for the Elvin-Kings under the sky,
Seven for he Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne