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DaDornta · 06-04-2007, 09:04 AM

From the first time i met you i felt the pull...
my own essence, led out of control.

Your beauty and grace, undefined with a face...
It's led me into a new and exciting place.

Your energy so pure, so clean and so bright,
guiding me to sleep at the end of each night.

Distant you are, and miles are abound...
but within your essence, myself I have found.

Someday, sometime, when the world is right--
I shall tell you my story, my essence...my light...

But untill then a secret I must keep...
for inside my soul, the attraction is deep.

For I do not wish to scare or offend,
and chase off the one who I hope to defend.

The love that I feel is true, and so deep.
And inside myself, a hole it does leak...

For knowing a soul, so pure and so kind,
only allows for my myself to unwind...

and imagine a future with us tied side to side,
with nothing but our love inside us to guide.

This is the message I am sending to you,
if only your heard it...
my life would ring true.

Perplexed Pixie · 06-04-2007, 11:09 AM

This was very touching and I felt your passion,
really I did!

Madamayo · 06-04-2007, 12:14 PM

Nice theme man. Shit was deep, keep writing.

DaDornta · 06-05-2007, 01:58 AM

Thanks for the thumbs up guys...I spend time reading my own stuff so much that I don't even know how to look at it objectivly anymore...

Sure, I have mad room to improve...but that's the fun/journey right?

Someday I hope to leave my offspring/relatives with a book of my poetry...just like my grandfather did. I never knew him--but by reading his poems I get a feel for who the man really was inside. He's immortalized himself in a way...

fuzzyninja · 06-05-2007, 02:12 PM

That's so cool. I wish my family had something like that. I hope to leave a book of poetry for my descendants also. Keep writing man, we need to get more readers/writers back in this world. It seems to be going to shit right now.

**Broliette** · 06-13-2007, 06:35 AM

Thats awesome man! Do you keep a journal?

DaDornta · 03-13-2008, 03:11 AM

I haven't read this one in ages...and honestly--I sat here and said, "wow, who wrote that...me?"

I wish I could be consistently inspired...have something to always write about.

I have about 8 or so poems right now that I've saved...I'm thinking about saving up to have a run of about 500 books published when I reach 20 poems. Just so my family/kin/friends will have "something" of "DaDornta" even after I pass. Books and word linger longer than lifetimes.

If I am to leave a legacy of myself, it be in words.

06-04-2007, 09:04 AM	#1
DaDornta Techno-Neo-Shaman Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 2,621 Grams: 8,130.63 Groans: 6 Groaned at 29 Times in 9 Posts Thanks: 192 Thanked 212 Times in 112 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	New poem I just wrote...(be kind...im messed up) From the first time i met you i felt the pull... my own essence, led out of control. Your beauty and grace, undefined with a face... It's led me into a new and exciting place. Your energy so pure, so clean and so bright, guiding me to sleep at the end of each night. Distant you are, and miles are abound... but within your essence, myself I have found. Someday, sometime, when the world is right-- I shall tell you my story, my essence...my light... But untill then a secret I must keep... for inside my soul, the attraction is deep. For I do not wish to scare or offend, and chase off the one who I hope to defend. The love that I feel is true, and so deep. And inside myself, a hole it does leak... For knowing a soul, so pure and so kind, only allows for my myself to unwind... and imagine a future with us tied side to side, with nothing but our love inside us to guide. This is the message I am sending to you, if only your heard it... my life would ring true. __________________ Being Broke: My Anti-Drug DaDornta Dot Net Join Date: Sep 2003 Never been a Moderator...never want to be.. Rick let's me stay at his leisure.

06-04-2007, 11:09 AM	#2
Perplexed Pixie Ladybug Sunflower Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 1,690 Grams: 42,663.99 Groans: 1 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 294 Thanked 479 Times in 180 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	This was very touching and I felt your passion, really I did! __________________ Always and forever she's a Pothead4sure~The artsie-fartsie-hippy type mom.... Please Dont Piss off the Fairies! I had a rose named after me and I was very flattered. But I was not pleased to read the description in the catalog: "No good in a bed, but fine against a wall."- Eleanor Roosevelt I don't want to be the glue that holds your pieces together I don't want to be your idol See this pedestal is high and I'm afraid of heights I don't want to be lived through A vicarious occasion Please open the window

06-04-2007, 12:14 PM	#3
Madamayo Jr. Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 201 Grams: 1,711.05 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 4 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Nice theme man. Shit was deep, keep writing. __________________ So what if I'm a sinner I've got black spots on my liver And cancer grown on both my lungs

06-05-2007, 02:12 PM	#5
fuzzyninja Lounge Lizard Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 447 Grams: 1,967.18 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 10 Times in 7 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	That's so cool. I wish my family had something like that. I hope to leave a book of poetry for my descendants also. Keep writing man, we need to get more readers/writers back in this world. It seems to be going to shit right now. __________________ Whenever you feel all meaning is gone - kick back your feet and light up a bong.

06-13-2007, 06:35 AM	#6
Broliette ~~~_\\|/_~~~ Tournaments Won: 4 Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 3,522 Grams: 52,408.07 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 3,798 Thanked 2,131 Times in 990 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: -1.000%	Thats awesome man! Do you keep a journal? __________________ Posting Guidelines The Art of Searching Grams Don't Click Here...

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06-05-2007, 01:58 AM	#4
DaDornta Techno-Neo-Shaman Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 2,621 Grams: 8,130.63 Groans: 6 Groaned at 29 Times in 9 Posts Thanks: 192 Thanked 212 Times in 112 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Thanks for the thumbs up guys...I spend time reading my own stuff so much that I don't even know how to look at it objectivly anymore... Sure, I have mad room to improve...but that's the fun/journey right? Someday I hope to leave my offspring/relatives with a book of my poetry...just like my grandfather did. I never knew him--but by reading his poems I get a feel for who the man really was inside. He's immortalized himself in a way...

03-13-2008, 03:11 AM	#7
DaDornta Techno-Neo-Shaman Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 2,621 Grams: 8,130.63 Groans: 6 Groaned at 29 Times in 9 Posts Thanks: 192 Thanked 212 Times in 112 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I haven't read this one in ages...and honestly--I sat here and said, "wow, who wrote that...me?" I wish I could be consistently inspired...have something to always write about. I have about 8 or so poems right now that I've saved...I'm thinking about saving up to have a run of about 500 books published when I reach 20 poems. Just so my family/kin/friends will have "something" of "DaDornta" even after I pass. Books and word linger longer than lifetimes. If I am to leave a legacy of myself, it be in words.

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