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07-07-2007, 04:06 PM

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Noctriginal Freestyles and the Daily Verbal

Critiques please. Be honest. I realize they sound like straight Hexum/Martinez lyrics for the most part, thats why I like them.

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This is pure intuition, through your bullshit I ain’t siftin’.
Nocturnal Orange Juice, we hear to seduce.
Random uncreative shit blind eyed goose,
Nocturnal Orange Juice.
Mistah Olivah Orange,
Fat and stupid,
That was real long before he was born.
Beagles knees, cheddah please
We aim to sieze.
Nocturnal Orange Juice.

© David Lamb

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Ya’ll see right through me if my name ain’t Scudewy.
Trippin’ these verbs, not getting jerbs.
I be squeezed straight blank once dis trick get through me.
Chillin’ while I’m millin’ on dis track,
Bitches heard that’s absurd, all dish fish don’t mean jack.
Keep on going, earth is flowin
Brain’s the name, we is the same
Motha fucka ain’t know shit.
Believe wit dis breeze, beagles knees
Don’t succeed, we be preen, to be seen,
Brodel where you at?

© David Lamb

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