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01-09-2008, 08:15 AM
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| Falling Into Infinity  Join Date: Jul 2006
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|  New poem/song This is the first thing I've written in a long time... hope it's decent. How quiet can you be? I'm a rat in the cellar- Weaving circles in and out of the skeletons you hide I see what you've done - I know who you've hurt - A tantric divide between harmonic poles The lines you cross are the crosses I bear, To see, To hear, To feel the touch of a love I've lost Or a love I've never had Is to know how happiness hurts in the end. |
 
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01-09-2008, 08:43 AM
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| nice. |
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01-30-2008, 01:40 AM
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| Nice poetry... Good writer do you write often.. hope u write a book of poems let me know if u publish.. |
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01-30-2008, 01:43 AM
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| Pretty nice. I like your style, flapjack.
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