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Kastro · 07-23-2003, 08:41 PM

Sup..

Just put up a freestyle I did with my boy, so check it out and gimme some honest feedback, im the second person spitting on the beat.

Heres the link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/kastr0music.htm

Peace..

hauptmann · 07-23-2003, 09:08 PM

Your rhyme scheme is a little wack. If you changed the way you rapped it might work, but with your voice as is, it sounds too flat and the person listening hears the end of each of your rhymes. You want to keep your rhymes flowing. You need flow.

Jaycrills · 07-23-2003, 09:18 PM

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Your rhyme scheme is a little wack. If you changed the way you rapped it might work, but with your voice as is, it sounds too flat and the person listening hears the end of each of your rhymes. You want to keep your rhymes flowing. You need flow.

Agree 100%

Devio · 07-23-2003, 10:38 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/cr...assinmusic.htm

Check out my song, its called Psychokenises..

Btw kastro you ****ing suck, quit rapping before i lyrically merc your ass.

Kastro · 07-23-2003, 11:53 PM

Shut up fool, if u wanna battle im game...

Devio · 07-24-2003, 12:29 AM

Dude your not even close to my elevation, battling you would be like beating a retard in a spelling bee.

hauptmann · 07-24-2003, 01:51 AM

This should be interesting, lets take this to the shelter.

Your rhymes are VERY similar to those of eminem "i was creeping in the darkness going to the hospital ward left the slut heartless when I stabbed her with a rhinoceros horn". I think you must listen to him alot or something, you even use his rhyme scheme. You need to articulate your words, your tripping on them every couple of rhymes and you kind of have an herbish accent.I can tell your trying to rhyme your words as fast as you can. You even rapped up your song like em does. funny
What up slim shady.

highallthetime · 07-24-2003, 02:03 AM

You guys sound the same. And btw I couldn't stand listening to either of them after the first 20 seconds.

Devio · 07-24-2003, 02:20 AM

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This should be interesting, lets take this to the shelter.
Your rhymes are VERY similar to those of eminem "i was creeping in the darkness going to the hospital ward left the slut heartless when I stabbed her with a rhinoceros horn". I think you must listen to him alot or something, you even use his rhyme scheme. You need to articulate your words, your tripping on them every couple of rhymes and you kind of have an herbish accent.I can tell your trying to rhyme your words as fast as you can. You even rapped up your song like em does. funny
What up slim shady

Gee, Einstein, considering the instrumental you can probably see why i was rhyming like that.

And being compared to Slim isnt an insult in the least if you meant it to be. Its actually a compliment. I was trying to emulate his style for this track. But yeah, this track was done a grip ago and it was my first recording. I think the 2nd verse was the dopest tho. **** give me an critizism i dont care. haha

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You guys sound the same. And btw I couldn't stand listening to either of them after the first 20 seconds.

And your opinion means sh1t to either of us. If your not even going to give it a chance then shut the hell up instead of posting some snide comment.

highallthetime · 07-24-2003, 02:29 AM

I gave you a chance.... and you failed miserably...

07-23-2003, 08:41 PM	#1
Kastro Banned Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 20 Grams: 27.15 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	All hip hoppers check this out.. Sup.. Just put up a freestyle I did with my boy, so check it out and gimme some honest feedback, im the second person spitting on the beat. Heres the link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/kastr0music.htm Peace..

07-23-2003, 09:08 PM	#2
hauptmann Seasoned Activist Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 3,340 Grams: 2,990.60 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Your rhyme scheme is a little wack. If you changed the way you rapped it might work, but with your voice as is, it sounds too flat and the person listening hears the end of each of your rhymes. You want to keep your rhymes flowing. You need flow. __________________ Marijuana.com Community Posting Guidelines This is my dance song...

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07-23-2003, 10:38 PM	#4
Devio Banned Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 342 Grams: 29.90 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/cr...assinmusic.htm Check out my song, its called Psychokenises.. Btw kastro you ****ing suck, quit rapping before i lyrically merc your ass.

07-23-2003, 11:53 PM	#5
Kastro Banned Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 20 Grams: 27.15 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Shut up fool, if u wanna battle im game...

07-24-2003, 12:29 AM	#6
Devio Banned Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 342 Grams: 29.90 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	Dude your not even close to my elevation, battling you would be like beating a retard in a spelling bee.

07-24-2003, 01:51 AM	#7
hauptmann Seasoned Activist Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 3,340 Grams: 2,990.60 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	This should be interesting, lets take this to the shelter. Your rhymes are VERY similar to those of eminem "i was creeping in the darkness going to the hospital ward left the slut heartless when I stabbed her with a rhinoceros horn". I think you must listen to him alot or something, you even use his rhyme scheme. You need to articulate your words, your tripping on them every couple of rhymes and you kind of have an herbish accent.I can tell your trying to rhyme your words as fast as you can. You even rapped up your song like em does. funny What up slim shady.

07-24-2003, 02:03 AM	#8
highallthetime Banned Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 148 Grams: 41.05 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	You guys sound the same. And btw I couldn't stand listening to either of them after the first 20 seconds.

07-24-2003, 02:29 AM	#10
highallthetime Banned Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 148 Grams: 41.05 Groans: 0 Groaned at 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Stock Portfolio Total Value: 0.000 Gain/Loss: 0.000%	I gave you a chance.... and you failed miserably...

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