urite4594

hey, song i wrote. any good? tryin to get my band out of vegas.




song i wrote, any good? my band tryin to get out of las vegas.




shoot me down again
hurt me one more time
its ok right now
I dont know you
No i dont
I never did

Where did i go
Where have u been
We dissapeared from
eachother back then
(eachother back then)

Life was sweet
I was never sad
O nevermind thats the life
That i wish i had
(That i wish I had)

Terrible how
it ended up to be
but thats what u are
my love monstrosity
(my love monstrosity)

{solo}

Now im not lost
But im not found
im just lying here shattered
broken on the ground

Left with nothing
inside of me
you tore me apart
my love monstrosity
(my love monstrosity)

It was all bull ****
from the very start
why couldn't i see
that u have no heart
(you have no soul)

I'll always remember
this atrocity
i will always remember
my love monstrosity

you ruined me
but thats ok
i never had a chance
in this life anyway

you were the one
that i thought i knew
and i've come to realize
i hate you


my love monstrosity

imported_foofurxl

your ****ing ghey

jebus

Shut up foofurxl , id like to see you write better.

Not bad urite! What kind of band are you? I think those lyrics would go great wiht a rock style music, sort of like audio slave but a bit different. Good job, keep it up!

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urite4594

thanks jebus. I dunno what u would call us. I ges a rock band would fit.

jebus

Are you more of a stoner band? like mellowed music that is kinda punk/rock?? That stuffs cool, thers a bunch of em around my town and i go to their concerts ! full of stoners You should make a recording and post it. Some one did that on here once i dunno how though

urite4594

ya. me and the band always toke up before practice. The thing with us though, we dont want to stay in one particular group. The songs we write and play is what we feel. I've got some mellow songs i wrote when i faded, and i got some crazy songs i wrote when im high as a kite. It all depends on our mood, but we got a good sound.