_Converge

This is my first endeavor into directing. I'm seventeen years old and love cinema.
This is the first part of the movie. I decided to break it up into 5-10 minute sections since
most contests have that same limit. Please tell me what you think.

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toothfairy420

Ok, I am going to give you an honest critique...

There were things i liked, and things that i could have lived without.
The technical stuff was all there, the camera work is great, the audio and video effects are great but it was really drawn out. There were a lot of scenes, while shot well, had no point, other than acting as a filler...or so it seemed. If you include them, you should make them make more sense. The first scene really bugged me, it was too dark, I had no idea what was going on, and even if you meant it to be like that, you shouldn't have.

The acting was horrible.

All in all, I thought that it was a great attempt, you are only 17, so you should be proud of your work, I could never do anything like this now, let alone at 17!

_Converge

Thanks for the honest critique. Yeah the acting, lol. I hate acting, whole-heartedly.
Though its hard to get people to dedicate to a project like this when they have no basis for your skill.
I'm just interested in the directing and editing. Thanks for the supportive words.